Ever since I read the DVD seller, I was waiting for your next story. You are a very gifted writer, trust me brother. To be able to recreate an incident with such detailing, really needs lots of patience, creativity, and hard work. I can see all of these and much more in the above story. You stories are inspiring me to write one of these and I will try and work hard towards the same. But I really doubt, I can reach your level. You're doing a brilliant job.
May god always bless you with a wonderful writing career.
Blessings and regards.